Could you please help to correct (read to the end)
Escribi una carta en Ingles hace un tiempo en el foro de Ingles, por alguna razon nadie la corrigio?!
Alguien me podria hacer el favor de corregirla aqui. Quizas estoy quebrando alguna regla del foro, pero no puedo entender porque nadie la corrigio en Ingles. Talvez alquien aqui pueda decirmelo?
Bueno aqui va la carta
P>Thank for helping me to check this letter.
Hello,
Dear Sir:
This is express my disappointment with the the plants the condominium plated around my townhouse. I understand that this is only basic stuff that you are planting since it is done by your regular staff, but what I got is half dry and with not a single flower. At least I was hoping for healthy plants. I don't know what the problem was, I'm far from been a garden expert, but for the next year I think this should be address in a more proactive way, more since is included in the maintenance. Plats were probably waiting for too long to be planted or perhaps you need more than two people at this time of the year to work on the planting and watering, or perhaps you need neighbours collaboration. This is a big condominium and we also pay high maintenance to have beautiful gardens and no sad looking ones. Thank you for your understanding. Unit owner #111

Yo esto lo hago solo para practicar mi escritura. No se quizas y a la gente no le gusten los complains?
Gracias/thanks
AnonymousCould you please help to correct (read to the end) Escribi una carta en Ingles hace un tiempo en el foro de Ingles, por alguna razon nadie la corrigio?! Alguien me podria hacer el favor de corregirla aqui. Quizas estoy quebrando alguna regla del foro, pero no puedo entender porque nadie la corrigio en Ingles. Talvez alquien aqui pueda decirmelo? Bueno aqui va la carta P>Thank for helping me to check this letter.

Hello, Dear Sir:

This is to express my disappointment with the the plants the condominium planted around my townhouse. I understand that this is only basic stuff that you are planting since it is done by your regular staff, but what I got is half dry and with not a single flower. At least I was hoping for healthy plants. I don't know what the problem was, I'm far from been a garden expert, but for the next year I think this should be address in a more proactive way, since is included in the maintenance. Plants were probably waiting for too long to be planted or perhaps you need more than two people at this time of the year to work on the planting and watering, or perhaps you need neighbours collaboration. This is a big condominium and we also pay high maintenance to have beautiful gardens and no sad looking ones. Thank you for your understanding.

Unit owner #111 Yo esto lo hago solo para practicar mi escritura. No se quizas y a la gente no le gusten los complains? Gracias/thanks

Me parece muy bien escrita si solamente estas praticando tu inglés.

Muchas gracias, me sorprende que no tenga mas que tres errores! No se si a ti te pasa con el espanol, pero yo pienso que hay muchos problemas siempre, o que no suena bien. Bueno ya te podras imaginar que soy bien insegura.
Would you correct something else if I post it here?
What is your first language, I see your Spanish is perfect!
Thanks
Hola, gracias por participar en el foro de español. Existe otro foro de inglés donde obtendrás más respuestas y pronta ayuda a tus dudas acerca de ese idioma, la dirección es: www.englishforums.com

Te invitamos a registrarte en el foro de español, eres bienvenida.
AnonymousMuchas gracias, me sorprende que no tenga mas que tres errores! No se si a ti te pasa con el espanol, pero yo pienso que hay muchos problemas siempre, o que no suena bien. Bueno ya te podras imaginar que soy bien insegura. Would you correct something else if I post it here? What is your first language, I see your Spanish is perfect! Thanks
Soy de Colombia pero ya hace unos años que vivo en los Estados Unidos. Claro que te ayudaremos si necesitas más ayuda con tu inglés. ¿Cómo aprendiste inglés? Sería bueno que te registraras. También puedes visitar The English Forums como recomendó Sanz.
Muchisimas gracias. Me inscribire ahora. Vivo en los Estados Unidos hace unos años tambien, pero llegue ya de 30, asi que no es facil.
Gracias
Dear Sir:
This is I wish to express my disappointment with the the plants the condominium planted around my townhouse. I understand that this is only basic stuff that you are planting since it is done by your regular staff, but what I got is half dry and with not a single flower. At least I was at least expecting hoping for healthy plants. I don't know what the problem was and I am far from been a garden expert. but for the Next year I think this should be addressed in a more proactive way, more since it is included in the maintenance. Plants were probably waiting for too long to before being planted or perhaps you need more than two people at this time of the year to working on the planting and watering, or perhaps you need neighbours collaboration. This is a big condominium and we also pay high maintenance to have beautiful gardens and not sad looking ones. Thank you for your understanding. Unit owner #111

Aquí esta, corregido. Lo que está en verde hay que quitar del texto y lo que hay en cursiva es lo que pondría yo.

Espero que te ayude.

Richard Welchman

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