Hey guys, i'm currently in a spanish 105 (second year spanish) class in college and my teacher is a pretty rough grader. i was wondering if there was anyone willing to proofread my assignment.
I had to write 10-15 lines on a tv show that i hate. i chose rosanne, but it was hard to write 10-15 lines about it so the writing is very redundant and elementary. here it is:
English: There isn't a tv show that i hate. But, one tv show that i do not like is roseanne. roseanne is the story of a poor American family in Illinois. Roseanne is about a family with five people: a wife, a husband, and three children. the family struggles with life problems. the tv show is very boring. the tv show started in 1998 and the reruns come on Nickelodeon. the the tv show, they are loud and annoying. i have seen a few episodes and they are not funny. roseanne barr, the main character, is fat and annoying. also, her voice is very irritating. her jokes are not funny. she is repulsive, bossy, and vulgar. Roseanne's children are noisy. also, roseanne is always on nickelodeon at night. i have never seen a full episode of roseanne. when roseanne comes on tv, i always change the channel. since roseanne is an annoying show, i do not like it.
Spanish: No hay una telenova que yo odio. Pero, una telenovela que no me gusta es Roseanne. Roseanne es el cuento de una familia Americana pobre en Illinois. Roseanne está acerca de una familia de cinco personas: una esposa, un esposo, y tres niños. La familia lucha con problemas de vida. La telenova es muy aburrida. La telenova empezó en 1988 y las repeticiones vienen en Nickelodeon. En la telenova, ellos son siempre fuertes y molestas. He visto unos pocos episodios y ellos no son chistosos. Roseanne Barr, el personaje principal, es gorda y molesta. También, su voz es muy irritante. Sus chistes no son cómicos. Ella es repulsiva, mandón y vulgar. Los niños de Roseanne son ruidosos. También, Roseanne siempre es en Nickelodeon de noche. Yo nunca he visto un episodio repleto de Roseanne. Cuándo Roseanne está en la televisión, yo siempre cambio el canal. Desde que Roseanne es una telenova molesta, no me gusta.
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