Carta/letter (read to the end) thanks

AnonymousCould you please help to correct (read to the end) Escribi una carta en Ingles hace un tiempo en el foro de Ingles, por alguna razon nadie la corrigio?! Alguien me podria hacer el favor de corregirla aqui. Quizas estoy quebrando alguna regla del foro, pero no puedo entender porque nadie la corrigio en Ingles. Talvez alquien aqui pueda decirmelo? Bueno aqui va la carta P>Thank for helping me to check this letter.

Hello, Dear Sir:

This is to express my disappointment with the the plants the condominium planted around my townhouse. I understand that this is only basic stuff that you are planting since it is done by your regular staff, but what I got is half dry and with not a single flower. At least I was hoping for healthy plants. I don't know what the problem was, I'm far from been a garden expert, but for the next year I think this should be address in a more proactive way, since is included in the maintenance. Plants were probably waiting for too long to be planted or perhaps you need more than two people at this time of the year to work on the planting and watering, or perhaps you need neighbours collaboration. This is a big condominium and we also pay high maintenance to have beautiful gardens and no sad looking ones. Thank you for your understanding.

Unit owner #111 Yo esto lo hago solo para practicar mi escritura. No se quizas y a la gente no le gusten los complains? Gracias/thanks

Me parece muy bien escrita si solamente estas praticando tu inglés.